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Recipe Of Curry

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2024-11-07 1871

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Hello, today I'll introduce the curry recipe because I ate them today's dinner.
First, you make a rice and put on ingredient. Ingredientis from man ot man but my ingredient is fork, onion, zucchini and curry powder. Second, you cut all of ingredient and you mix curry powder and water. Third you put in ingredient to curry&water. Then you boil it. When it is thick it's finsh, also you think curry is spicy you can add coconut water.
Enjoy your meal!

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Hello, today I'll introduce the curry recipe because I ate them today's dinner.
>> Hello, I'll introduce the curry recipe today because I ate it for dinner. 

First, you make a rice and put on ingredient. 
>> First, cook rice and add some ingredients. 

Ingredientis from man ot man but my ingredient is fork, onion, zucchini and curry powder.
>> The ingredients differ from person to person, but my ingredients are pork, onion, zucchini, and curry powder. 

Second, you cut all of ingredient and you mix curry powder and water. 
>> Second, cut all ingredients and mix the curry power and water. 

Third you put in ingredient to curry&water. 
>> Third, put the ingredients in the curry water. 

Then you boil it. 
>> Bring it to a boil.

When it is thick it's finsh, also you think curry is spicy you can add coconut water.
>> When the soup thickens, it's ready to be served. Also, you can add coconut water if you think the curry is spicy. 

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