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If you could switch jobs, what job would you choose to do?

작성자: 오*영
2024-11-08 2131

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I always consider about that.
Because I didn't have been any what I want to be, since I was young.
My mom told me to be teacher. But I did't want to be,
So I always support to my son's dreams, whatever he wants.
When I had to decide to my carrer path, I told my mom that I wanted to be dog groomer because I like dogs, at that time.
But I saw my mom's face that she didn't want.
However, I knew what she worried about. It was not usual.
I understand why she want me to be teacher, ever then and now.
I couldn't persist to be like it.
So,If it is possible now, I want to be like zookeeper.
I know what caring other one is too hard and need much patient.
Also, I might be keep working at now company.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! I am a bit surprised to know that you wanted to be a zookeeper. It’s not a job I would usually hear people wanting to do. It’s never too late to pursue your dream job. It’s also okay to pursue a different career. Choose whatever you think is best. ^^
~T. Jewel
I always consider about that.
>>I always consider that.
Because I didn't have been any what I want to be, since I was young.
>>Because I haven't been who I wanted to be since I was young.
My mom told me to be teacher. But I did't want to be,
>>My mom told me to be a teacher, but I didn’t want to be one.
So I always support to my son's dreams, whatever he wants.
>>So I always support my son's dreams, whatever he wants.
When I had to decide to my carrer path, I told my mom that I wanted to be dog groomer because I like dogs, at that time.
>>When I had to decide on my career path, I told my mom that I wanted to be a dog groomer because I liked dogs at that time.
But I saw my mom's face that she didn't want.
>>But I saw my mom's face, and she didn’t seem to want that.
However, I knew what she worried about. It was not usual.
>>However, I knew what she was worried about. It wasn't usual.
I understand why she want me to be teacher, ever then and now.
>>I understand why she wanted me to be a teacher, both then and now.
I couldn't persist to be like it.
>>I just couldn’t seem to like it.
So,If it is possible now, I want to be like zookeeper.
>>So, if it's possible now, I want to be a zookeeper.
I know what caring other one is too hard and need much patient.
>>I know that caring for others is too hard and requires a lot of patience.
Also, I might be keep working at now company.
>>Also, I might keep working at my current company.
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