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I don't know exactly the rules and laws of other countries and I can't see how strict our traffic rules and laws are. Still, I think that the laws of our country are not loose. The police keeps watching most of the traffic on the streets with automated cameras. On the highways, there are police officers. They have no generousity or flexibility in catching and imposing fines on traffic violators.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Whenever I watch Korean dramas where the antagonist drives a getaway car, I often see how easy it is for Koreans to find and chase that car because there are cameras all over Korea. I think Korea's system when it comes to traffic is very organized, and being strict with it is also good for protecting people, especially when accidents occur. Just one thing about this homework: I corrected the 5th sentence only because of the spelling of the word 'generosity,' which shouldn't have a 'u,' unlike the word 'generous.
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I don't know exactly the rules and laws of other countries and I can't see how strict our traffic rules and laws are. 
>> CORRECT
Still, I think that the laws of our country are not loose. 
>> CORRECT
The police keeps watching most of the traffic on the streets with automated cameras. 
>> CORRECT
On the highways, there are police officers. 
>> CORRECT
They have no generousity or flexibility in catching and imposing fines on traffic violators.
>> They have no generosity or flexibility in catching and imposing fines on traffic violators.
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