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I had experience. It was different from the internet photos.
For example,room is not clean

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Hi, Lily!
I totally agree! These are common experiences for some customers. The photos they posts online are different from the rooms they have in those hotels, and some are really messy or dirty.
- T. Caitlyn 
I had experience. 
>> I had a bad experience.
It was different from the internet photos.
>> CORRECT
For example,room is not clean
>> For example, the room is not clean.
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