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People want to go to the private hospital.
Because. Most famous doctors are working at there.
Each private hospital are specialized in particular disease.
For example, hospital for liver is Hyundai hospital
lung and woman's disease can be well treated by Samsung
And Yonsei Severance is in charge of nerves .
Of course Seoul university hospital is the best.
All of them are mammoth level of big hospital and they have good conditional like hotel or resort.

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Ms. Sunny!
Thank you for expressing your thoughts here.
It;s nice to know that your country provide centers that specializes in specific disease. People would know where to go if they have underlying conditions. 
Great day ahead.
Aki~

People want to go to the private hospital. 
>>> CORRECT!
 
Because. Most famous doctors are working at there.
>>> Because. Most famous doctors are working there.

Each private hospital are specialized in particular disease.
>>> Each private hospital is specialized in a particular disease

For example, hospital for liver is Hyundai hospital
>>> For example, the hospital for the liver is Hyundai Hospital.

Lung and woman's disease can be well treated by Samsung
>>> CORRECT!

And Yonsei Severance is in charge of nerves .
>>> CORRECT!

Of course Seoul university hospital is the best.
>>> Of course, Seoul University Hospital is the best.

All of them are mammoth level of big hospital and they have good conditional like hotel or resort.
>>> All of them is a mammoth-level hospitals and they have good conditions like hotels or resorts.
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