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11/13(Wed) homework

작성자: 김*희
2024-11-13 1930

회원님의 영작문

[How is our accent affected by our birthplace?]

I think that the tradition depends on the birthplace.
People have their own traditions according to the place, and accents or some special words are one of the traditions.
The accent is affected for a long time in our life.
Children's accents may change depending on where they live.
However, It is difficult to change the accent after being an adult.
My speech and accent also changed after I moved to a different area in high school.
I have been living in a southern place for four years, but my accent is not changed, and it is different from the traditional accent in this area.
We usually learn language and pronunciation from our parents.
So, even if the parents don't live in their birthplace anymore, children can learn their accents naturally.
Sometimes we can recognize someone's birthplace after we talk together due to their special accent.
It is very interesting, but sometimes it creates prejudice.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Nicole!
I hope you arrived home safe. Your response highlights well how accents develop and how they reflect a person’s background. The point about accents potentially leading to prejudice is a good observation.
~ Trixia

CONTENT:
I think that the tradition depends on the birthplace.
- I think traditions vary based on one’s birthplace.
People have their own traditions according to the place, and accents or some special words are one of the traditions.
- People develop unique traditions based on where they are from, and accents or certain expressions are part of these traditions.
The accent is affected for a long time in our life.
- Our accent is influenced throughout our lives.
Children's accents may change depending on where they live.
- CORRECT.
However, It is difficult to change the accent after being an adult.
- However, it is difficult to change one’s accent after reaching adulthood.
My speech and accent also changed after I moved to a different area in high school.
- CORRECT.
I have been living in a southern place for four years, but my accent is not changed, and it is different from the traditional accent in this area.
- I have been living in the south for four years, but my accent has not changed, and it remains different from the traditional accent here.
We usually learn language and pronunciation from our parents.
- CORRECT.
So, even if the parents don't live in their birthplace anymore, children can learn their accents naturally.
- Therefore, even if parents no longer live in their birthplace, children may naturally pick up their parents’ accent.
Sometimes we can recognize someone's birthplace after we talk together due to their special accent.
- Sometimes, we can identify someone’s birthplace after speaking with them because of their distinct accent.
It is very interesting, but sometimes it creates prejudice.
- CORRECT.

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