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What are the consequences of spending less time interacting face-to-face?

작성자: 안*윤
2024-11-18 1497

회원님의 영작문

Without face to face interecting, it probably could be difficult to feel others feeling directly and it would lead to misunderstanding between individuals.
Besides that, If the relationship is new, it would take time for people to build the intimacy and trust.
If it lasts for long time, people could feel lonely also.
I think the best way to interact with people who i really care is to meet each other and talk face to face.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Ms. Anna! I totally agree! It's much easier to connect with others when you can see their expressions and body language. Building trust and closeness takes time, but meeting in person really makes a big difference. It's also nice to have those face-to-face conversations where you can really share your feelings!
~T. Jenna

Without face to face interecting, it probably could be difficult to feel others feeling directly and it would lead to misunderstanding between individuals.
>>Without face-to-face interaction, it could be difficult to understand others' feelings directly, and this could lead to misunderstandings between individuals.
OR
>>Without face-to-face interaction, it can be like speaking in a vacuum, making it hard to truly grasp others' emotions, which may lead to a breakdown in communication.
Besides that, If the relationship is new, it would take time for people to build the intimacy and trust.
>>Besides that, if the relationship is new, it will take time for people to build intimacy and trust.
OR
>>Moreover, if the relationship is in its infancy, it will take time for individuals to lay the groundwork for intimacy and trust.
If it lasts for long time, people could feel lonely also.
>>If it lasts for a long time, people could also feel lonely.
OR
>>If it drags on for too long, even the closest bonds can feel like a one-way street, leaving people feeling lonely.
I think the best way to interact with people who i really care is to meet each other and talk face to face.
>>I think the best way to interact with people I really care about is to meet and talk face to face.
OR
>>I believe the best way to foster meaningful connections with those I truly care about is to go the extra mile and engage in face-to-face conversations.
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