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What’s the most unexpected lesson you’ve learned from your job?

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What’s the most unexpected lesson you’ve learned from your job?


The most unexpected lesson I’ve leanrned from my job is the way to be recognized by company.
My colleague is the someone who is recognized at my company.
He is sometimes be a liar.
It does not means the aspect of legal.
It can be cute in some what, but I shocked his acting.
The more surprising thing is that my team leader already knew it.
For example, My center leader said that they had to occupy the conference room.
But It might not possible.
Because our client usually visit every thuesday.
So I said the true to my center leader.
Next day, the leader told it again to my colleauge. and My colleauge checked client visiting time to our client.
My client said that he won’t come that time because he had some problems to solve.
It is true. But my colleauge reported it to center leader like that.
“I coordinated the time between my client and you. So you can occupy the conference room.”
He is smart.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Stella! Sometimes, it's difficult dealing with this kind of person. I hope you won't have any issues at work. ^^ Have a great day and enjoy your weekend!
~T. Jewel
The most unexpected lesson I’ve leanrned from my job is the way to be recognized by company.
>>The most unexpected lesson I’ve learned from my job is how to be recognized by the company.
My colleague is the someone who is recognized at my company.
>>My colleague is someone who is recognized at my company.
He is sometimes be a liar.
>>He is sometimes a liar.
It does not means the aspect of legal.
>>It does not mean the aspect of legality.
It can be cute in some what, but I shocked his acting.
>>It can be cute in some ways, but I was shocked by his acting.
The more surprising thing is that my team leader already knew it.
>>The most surprising thing is that my team leader already knew it.
For example, My center leader said that they had to occupy the conference room.
>>One time, my center leader said that they had to occupy the conference room.
But It might not possible.
>>But it might not be possible.
Because our client usually visit every thuesday.
>>Because our client usually visits every Tuesday.
So I said the true to my center leader.
>>So I told the truth to my center leader.
Next day, the leader told it again to my colleauge. and My colleauge checked client visiting time to our client.
>>The next day, the leader told it again to my colleague, and my colleague checked the client’s visiting time.
My client said that he won’t come that time because he had some problems to solve.
>>My client said that he won’t come at that time because he has some problems to solve.
It is true. 
>>CORRECT
But my colleauge reported it to center leader like that.
>>But my colleague reported it to the center leader like that
“I coordinated the time between my client and you. So you can occupy the conference room.”
>>He said, 'I coordinated the time between my client and you, so you can occupy the conference room.'
He is smart.
>>CORRECT
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