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Have you ever violated any rules? How did it feel?

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2024-11-21 1849

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When I was a high school student, I violated my school's rules.
I was a senior high school and it was time to near the national colleage extrance exam.
So teachers didn't educate their students and we studied ourselves in the classroom.
At that time, I wanted to go to my own study room and study alone.
Because there are students who didn't study and hanged out with their friends.
It was so noisy in the classroom.
So I lied to my teacher that I am so hurt and I went to my own study room.
It was good for me but I felt guilty because I lied for my teacher.
So I didn't do that again.

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Great job Nicole!
Thank you for submitting your homework. Have a great day :)
~ T. Demi ^^

When I was a high school student, I violated my school's rules.
CORRECT!
OR>> I tried violating a school's rules when I was in high school.
I was a senior high school and it was time to near the national colleage extrance exam.
>>I was a senior in high school, and it was near the time of the national college entrance exam.
So teachers didn't educate their students and we studied ourselves in the classroom.
>> Our teachers didn't attend the class and we just studied by ourselves in the classroom.
At that time, I wanted to go to my own study room and study alone.
>>CORRECT!
Because there are students who didn't study and hanged out with their friends. It was so noisy in the classroom.
>>Since there were students who didn't study and hung out with their friends, the classroom was noisy.
So I lied to my teacher that I am so hurt and I went to my own study room.
>> So, I lied to my teacher that I was sick and went to my own study room.
It was good for me but I felt guilty because I lied for my teacher.
>> It was good for me but I felt guilty because I lied to my teacher.
So I didn't do that again.
>> CORRECT!
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