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Do you think having a brand and expensive clothes are better than cheap clothes? Why or why not?

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in my opinion,not all expensive clothes are better than cheap.
but general expensive clothes and famous brand clothes are good quality, in my opnion.
sure of famous brand clothes are expensive compare of not famous clothes.even same materials.
but when we famous brand and expensive clothes wearing seems to good mood.
sure of Appearance isn't everything, but I think it's important.

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Hi, Hun!
I agree with you when you said that not all expensive and branded clothes are better than cheap ones. However, I also think that since these brands are famous, they pay more attention to the quality of their products to avoid ruining their reputation, thus making their products a bit better than others.
- T. Caitlyn
in my opinion,not all expensive clothes are better than cheap.
>> In my opinion, not all expensive clothes are better than cheap ones.
but general expensive clothes and famous brand clothes are good quality, in my opnion.
>> But in general, expensive clothes and famous brand clothes are of good quality, in my opinion.
sure of famous brand clothes are expensive compare of not famous clothes.even same materials.
>> Sure, famous brand clothes are more expensive compared to non-famous ones, even with the same materials.
but when we famous brand and expensive clothes wearing seems to good mood.
>> But wearing famous brand and expensive clothes seems to put us in a good mood.
sure of Appearance isn't everything, but I think it's important.
>> Sure, appearance isn't everything, but I think it's important.
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