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Is there a hobby you are thinking about starting these days? What is it?

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I have just started studying Japanese a month ago because I have a plan to go to Japan on a vacation. Through my experience in Japan many years ago, I discovered how difficult it was to make a trip without Japanese skills. People that I saw even in the Yaseda University didn¡¯t have English skills enough to converse in English. Therefore, I hope this trip to Japan with family could be wonderful and meaningful through interaction with native Japanese people who are the best-know for their kindness and friendliness to visitors. As far as I am concerned, Japan has many tour attractions across the country which is almost 4 times as big as the land of South Korea. On top of that, I want my children to be motivated to learn Japanese as second foreign language so that they can expand themselves into global market or university overseas.

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Hello, Mr. Steve!  Learning a language as a hobby not only enhances cognitive and communication skills but also opens up cultural, social, and professional opportunities, making it a highly rewarding activity.
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I have just started studying Japanese a month ago because I have a plan to go to Japan on a vacation. 
>>I have just started studying Japanese a month ago because I have a plan to go to Japan on vacation. 
Through my experience in Japan many years ago, I discovered how difficult it was to make a trip without Japanese skills. 
>>Correct!
People that I saw even in the Yaseda University didn¡¯t have English skills enough to converse in English. 
>>People who I saw even at Yaseda University didn¡¯t have enough English skills to converse in English. 
Therefore, I hope this trip to Japan with family could be wonderful and meaningful through interaction with native Japanese people who are the best-know for their kindness and friendliness to visitors. 
>>Therefore, I hope this trip to Japan with family could be wonderful and meaningful through interactions with native Japanese who are best known for their kindness and friendliness to visitors. 
As far as I am concerned, Japan has many tour attractions across the country which is almost 4 times as big as the land of South Korea. 
>>As far as I am concerned, Japan has many tourist attractions across its area which is almost 4 times as big as the land of South Korea. 
On top of that, I want my children to be motivated to learn Japanese as second foreign language so that they can expand themselves into global market or university overseas.
>>On top of that, I want my children to be motivated to learn Japanese as a second language so that they can expand themselves into the global market or universities overseas.


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