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Hi Teacher Divina,
Happy Thursday,
Thank you for giving me homework.
Homework
What is the best food to eat outside your home? Why?
I think the best food to eat outside is meat.
Because My favorite food is meat
and meat restaurants are comfortable and easy place that people almost look for when they want eat out.

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Hi, Jae Hyeon!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think the best food to eat outside is meat.
>>CORRECT!

2. Because My favorite food is meat.
>>My favorite food is meat.

3. and meat restaurants are comfortable and easy place that people almost look for when they want eat out.
>>Meat restaurants are comfortable places that people always look for when they want to eat out.
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