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Q: How can you prepare for potential risks?
A: I think I can't actually prepare for potential risks.
If I really want to prepare for every potential risks, then I think I should be aware that there might be some risks every moment.
But I can't really do it, so I should just deal with the risk.

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Hello, Paul!
It's true that it's difficult to prepare for every possible risk, but being aware of potential risks can help you react better when they happen. Sometimes, focusing on being flexible and ready to adapt is the best approach.
~ Trixia

CONTENT:
I think I can't actually prepare for potential risks. 
- I don't think I can actually prepare for potential risks.
If I really want to prepare for every potential risks, then I think I should be aware that there might be some risks every moment.
- If I really want to prepare for every potential risk, I think I should be aware that there might be risks at any moment.
But I can't really do it, so I should just deal with the risk.
- However I can't really do that, so I should just deal with the risks when they occur.
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