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Do you meet new people more often now than in the past?
Do you enjoy talking to new people?
Where can you meet new people?
Do you like meeting new people?
Have you made any new friends recently?

I don¡¯t meet new people often these days because I¡¯m busy studying for the IELTS. I used to meet new people through hobby groups or clubs, but now I don¡¯t have much time for those activities.

 

What do you often talk about with your new friends?

When I meet new people, I often talk about my future career plans because we¡¯re all thinking about life after graduation.

 

Did you make a lot of friends when you were a child?
Do you like making friends?

Yes, I made many friends as a child, especially living in an apartment complex with kids my age. I enjoy making friends because I like meeting new people and hearing their different stories.

 

 

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Hi there! You surprised me with your answers! It's my my pleasure to check and simplify them. I hope you could do well on your interview and IELTS exams! Keep youself busy preparing for these  requirements! Good luck!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Do you meet new people more often now than in the past?
Do you enjoy talking to new people?
Where can you meet new people?
Do you like meeting new people?
Have you made any new friends recently?

>>> 
I don¡¯t meet new people much lately because I¡¯m busy studying for the IELTS. I used to meet people through hobby groups or clubs, but now I don¡¯t have time for them.

What do you often talk about with your new friends?

When I meet new people, I often talk about my future career plans because we¡¯re all thinking about life after graduation.
>>> CORRECT~!^^



Did you make a lot of friends when you were a child?
Do you like making friends?

Yes, I made many friends as a child, especially living in an apartment complex with kids my age. I enjoy making friends because I like meeting new people and hearing their different stories.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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