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Q: What are some healthy habits you practice every day? How do they help you stay healthy?
A: I think one healthy habit I practice is sleeping enough.
I sleep early and wake up early, and I usually sleep for eight hours a day, so I can keep my mental fresh everyday.
Another healthy habit is eating a lot of vegetable.

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Hello, Paul!
That sounds like a proper routine! I believe you are healthy and that makes you responsible in your daily life. Keep it up!
~ Teacher Trixia

CONTENT:
I think one healthy habit I practice is sleeping enough.
- CORRECT.
>>> OR: One healthy habit I practice is getting enough sleep.
I sleep early and wake up early, and I usually sleep for eight hours a day, so I can keep my mental fresh everyday.
- CORRECT.
>>> OR: I try to go to bed early and wake up early, which helps me get about eight hours of sleep each night. This helps me feel mentally refreshed every day, and it keeps me focused and energized.
Another healthy habit is eating a lot of vegetable.
Another healthy habit I have is eating lots of vegetables.
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