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What are you most excited about for your coming holiday trip with your family?

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I have 2type of things what I am most excited about for family trip.
One thing is a kind of worry.
Because I wonder if the transportation plans are fitted in the plan.
I can understand and change the plans about the other things.
But tarnsportation is different from other things.
So, I'm going to remember the time and check the time of transportation, again.
And
The other thing is a kind of anticipation.
When I asked my son what he want to eat, he told me to eat Tomyumgoong.
I let him know that the food is UNESCO traditons.
I saw that his eyes are sparkling.
So, I'm searching the popular restaurant.
I'm look forward to showing him many things and tasting this kind of foods for him.
Above of all, It's been a first time for family abroad trip.
I hope that the trip is safe,fun and we can remember forever, happily.

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Hi, Stella!  You both sound excited and anxious about your upcoming trip. I hope everything will turn out well. ^^ Relax and enjoy! See you on Thursday! 
~T. Jewel
I have 2type of things what I am most excited about for family trip.
>>I have two types of things I'm most excited about for the family trip.
One thing is a kind of worry.
>>I worry about one thing.
Because I wonder if the transportation plans are fitted in the plan.
>>I wonder if the transportation plans will fit into the schedule.
I can understand and change the plans about the other things.
>>I understand and I can adjust our plans for other things.
But tarnsportation is different from other things.
>>But transportation concerns are different from everything else.
So, I'm going to remember the time and check the time of transportation, again.
>>So, I¡¯m going to keep track of the time and double-check the transportation schedule.
The other thing  is a kind of anticipation.
>>The other thing I'm excited about is the sense of anticipation.
When I asked my son what he want to eat, he told me to eat Tomyumgoong.
>>When I asked my son what he wanted to eat, he said he wanted Tom Yum Goong.
I let him know that the food is UNESCO traditons.
>>I told him that the food is part of UNESCO's traditions.
I saw that his eyes are sparkling.
>>I saw that his eyes sparkled.
So, I'm searching the popular restaurant.
>>So, I'm looking for a popular restaurant.
I'm look forward to showing him many things and tasting this kind of foods for him.
>>I'm looking forward to showing him many things and letting him taste different kinds of food.
Above of all, It's been a first time for family abroad trip.
>>Above all, it will be the first time our family goes abroad on a trip.
I hope that the trip is safe,fun and we can remember forever, happily.
>>I hope the trip is safe, fun, and something we can remember happily forever.

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