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Are there specific rules for smoking areas? Give me some examples.

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only in my opnion, no rules in the smoking areas.
but most smoking areas having some common.
fisrt, most smoking areas have some benches. because many smokers have smoke while a take a rest.
second, There are should be good ventilation. if bad ventilation, smoker will be choke to death.
third, smoking areas must have fire extinguishers.if don't have fire extinguishers in smoking areas, it can be spread of big fire.

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Hi, Hun! 
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! These things are very common in smoking areas. Just to add, some rules would include the proper disposal of cigarettes, so they should throw them properly, and they should not stay near the door of a building; it should be in an open area.
-T. Caitlyn 
only in my opnion, no rules in the smoking areas.
>> In my opinion, there are no rules in the smoking areas.
but most smoking areas having some common.
>> But most smoking areas have some things in common.
fisrt, most smoking areas have some benches. because many smokers have smoke while a take a rest.
>> First, most smoking areas have some benches because many smokers smoke while taking a rest.
second, There are should be good ventilation. 
>> Second, there should be good ventilation.
if bad ventilation, smoker will be choke to death.
>> If there is bad ventilation, smokers will suffocate.
third, smoking areas must have fire extinguishers.
>> CORRECT
if don't have fire extinguishers in smoking areas, it can be spread of big fire.
>> If there are no fire extinguishers in smoking areas, it can lead to a big fire spreading.
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