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I told you before that the trainee official started to work in our team, and I had to teach new member how to work.
It was very hard for me to teach new member while doing my own tasks.
And It was also difficult to teach work process easier to beginner.
Because I already had knowledge in our field, but our baby didn't!

As I teach work process to new member, I understand once more the knowledge I already knew.
And our new member get knowledge while working.

So I hope not to move to other department! I don't like spending time adjusting to my new tasks!

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Hi there, Min!

If you think about it, it is a privilege to teach new members new tasks and knowledge. However, it takes time. Once you were a neophyte at work and can you imagine if no one taught you the right things to do. Right now, you are skilled because of your seniors. Now, you can thank them for teaching you well.

Anyway, it is true that teaching and working at the same time is difficult and it can be stressful. Then, I also hope that you will stay in your current department.

You showed mastery of making paragraphs here on this composition. There are underlined words or grammar points you need to study. read them carefully below. 

You did a very good job in writing!

-T. Donna~

I told you before that the trainee official started to work in our team, and I had to teach new member how to work.
It was very hard for me to teach new member while doing my own tasks.
And It was also difficult to teach work process easier to beginner.
Because I already had knowledge in our field, but our baby didn't!
>> I told you before that the trainee officially started to work in our team, and I had to teach the new member how to work.
It was very hard for me to teach the new member while doing my own tasks.
And It was also difficult to teach work process easier to a beginner because I already have knowledge in our field, but our baby doesn't!


As I teach work process to new member, I understand once more the knowledge I already knew.
And our new member get knowledge while working.
>> As I teach work process to the new member, I understand once more the knowledge I already knew.
And our new member gets knowledge while working.


So I hope not to move to other department! I don't like  spending time adjusting to my new tasks!
>> So I hope not to move to another department! I don't like  spending time adjusting to my new tasks!
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