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If you could paint your room with a new color or put on new wallpaper, which color or design would y

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Well, I think the choice will depend on whether it's a room that other people can see or not.
If it's a room that people see, I think they'll choose a normal color and wallpaper.
Generally, I think I will choose blue and green colors such as sky blue or light green, which are colors that can be comfortable and concetrated well.
Also, I think I will choose the circled pattern or stripes that many people choose for the wallpaper.
But if it's a room that people don't see, I think I'll choose my favorite colors and wallpaper.
I like bright pink, yellow, and light purple mixed with pink and white, so I think I will choose theose colors.
And I think I'm going to choose some noticeable and focused wallpaper, but I think I'm going to choose shiny wallpaper or princess style and antique wallpaper.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for submitting your answer. 
I really like the colors you chose, and I agree with the reason behind them. 
I would love to have that color too if my room were repainted—well, especially the light green one. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


Well, I think the choice will depend on whether it's a room that other people can see or not.
>> CORRECT.
If it's a room that people see, I think they'll choose a normal color and wallpaper.
>> I think if it's a room that people can see, they will choose neutral colors and wallpaper.
Generally, I think I will choose blue and green colors such as sky blue or light green, which are colors that can be comfortable and concetrated well.
>> Generally, I think I will choose blue and green colors, such as sky blue or light green, as these colors are comfortable and help with concentration.
Also, I think I will choose the circled pattern or stripes that many people choose for the wallpaper.
>> Also, I think I will choose circular patterns or stripes, which many people prefer for wallpaper.
But if it's a room that people don't see, I think I'll choose my favorite colors and wallpaper.
>> CORRECT.
I like bright pink, yellow, and light purple mixed with pink and white, so I think I will choose theose colors.
>> I like bright pink, yellow, and light purple mixed with pink and white, so I think I will choose those colors..
And I think I'm going to choose some noticeable and focused wallpaper, but I think I'm going to choose shiny wallpaper or princess style and antique wallpaper.
>> I think I'm going to choose some bold and attention-grabbing wallpaper, such as shiny wallpaper, princess-style, or antique designs.
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