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자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

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회원님의 영작문

Do you think car colours are important?
à Yes, car colors can be important because they reflect the owner’s personality and preferences. Some people choose bright colors for visibility, while others prefer neutral tones for a classic look.

What do you usually do when there is a traffic jam?
Did you enjoy traveling by car when you were a kid?
à Yes, I enjoyed long car trips as a kid because they felt adventurous. During traffic jams, I listen to music or podcasts to pass the time.

Do you prefer to be a driver or a passenger?
What types of cars do you like?
à I prefer being a passenger because it’s more relaxing. I like eco-friendly cars because they’re better for the environment.

Will you post on social media if you lose your item?
Have you ever lost things?
à Yes, I’ve lost my wallet once, and it was very stressful. If I lose something important, I might post on social media to ask for help.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Young In! Here are the improved versions of your responses to the questions you chose for your homework.
~T. Jenna

Do you think car colours are important?
Yes, car colours can be important because they reflect the owner’s personality and preferences. Some people choose bright colors for visibility, while others prefer neutral tones for a classic look.
>> Absolutely yes! I believe car colours can be quite significant as they often reflect the owner's personality and tastes. For example, some people opt for bright colors to make their car more noticeable, while others prefer more neutral shades for a timeless and sophisticated appearance.

Did you enjoy traveling by car when you were a kid?
Yes, I enjoyed long car trips as a kid because they felt adventurous.
>>Yes, I really relished long car trips when I was a child because they felt like an adventure. During the journey, I would listen to music or catch up on podcasts to make the time pass more quickly, which made the experience even more enjoyable.

What do you usually do when there is a traffic jam?
During traffic jams, I listen to music or podcasts to pass the time.
>>When I find myself stuck in a traffic jam, I usually listen to music or catch up on podcasts to make the time pass more quickly.  It helps make the situation less frustrating.

Do you prefer to be a driver or a passenger?
I prefer being a passenger because it’s more relaxing.
>> I enjoy being a passenger more because it’s much more relaxing. When I’m not driving, I can just sit back, enjoy the scenery, or listen to music without having to worry about the road. It also gives me a chance to be more present with others, like chatting or simply enjoying their company.

What types of cars do you like?
I like eco-friendly cars because they’re better for the environment.
>>I’m drawn to eco-friendly cars because they are much better for the environment. I like that they help reduce pollution and contribute to a more sustainable future. Additionally, they often come with advanced technology that makes driving more efficient and enjoyable.

Will you post on social media if you lose your item?
If I lose something important, I might post on social media to ask for help.
>>If I lose something important, I would consider posting on social media to ask for help. It can be a quick way to reach out to a wider group of people, and sometimes, I might even get helpful responses or find someone who has found the item.

Have you ever lost things?
Yes, I’ve lost my wallet once, and it was very stressful. 
>>Yes, I’ve lost my wallet once, and it was incredibly stressful. I had to retrace my steps, hoping it would turn up. It was definitely an experience I wouldn’t want to go through again.





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