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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Please change difficult words to easy words and correct them so that IELTS Speaking 6.5 or higher sc

작성자: 이*인
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회원님의 영작문

What kinds of games do you expect to watch in the future?
Do you like watching sports programs on TV?
à I’d like to watch international football matches in the future. I also enjoy watching sports programs on TV, especially highlights of big games.

Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
Do you like drawing?
à Yes, I learned drawing in school, and I still enjoy sketching in my free time. It’s a relaxing and creative hobby for me.

Do you want to learn more about art?
Do you like to go to the gallery?
à I’d love to learn more about painting techniques. Visiting galleries inspires me because I get to see different styles of art.

Do you want to improve your photography skills?
What is your favourite family photo?
à I’d like to improve my photography skills by learning editing techniques. My favorite family photo is from a vacation where everyone looks happy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Young In! Please check the following:
~T. Jenna

What kinds of games do you expect to watch in the future?
Do you like watching sports programs on TV?
I’d like to watch international football matches in the future. I also enjoy watching sports programs on TV, especially highlights of big games.
>>
I’m interested in watching international football matches in the future. I also enjoy watching sports programs on TV, particularly highlights of major games, as they give me a quick overview of the most exciting moments.

Did you learn drawing when you were a kid?
Do you like drawing?
Yes, I learned drawing in school, and I still enjoy sketching in my free time. It’s a relaxing and creative hobby for me.
>>Yes, I learned drawing in school, and I still relish sketching in my free time. It’s a relaxing and creative hobby that allows me to unwind and express myself.

Do you want to learn more about art?
Do you like to go to the gallery?
I’d love to learn more about painting techniques. Visiting galleries inspires me because I get to see different styles of art.
>>I’d love to learn more about painting techniques. Visiting galleries really inspires me because it allows me to experience a variety of artistic styles and gain new perspectives on creativity.

Do you want to improve your photography skills?
What is your favourite family photo?
I’d like to improve my photography skills by learning editing techniques. My favorite family photo is from a vacation where everyone looks happy.
>>I’d like to enhance my photography skills by learning editing techniques. My favorite family photo is from a vacation, where everyone looks happy and the moment feels perfectly captured.
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