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Online shopping is very convenient and reduces our shopping time. However, it has some problems. Excessive packaging of products generates waste, which is bad to the environment. Moreover, online shopping doesn¡¯t require salespeople, so many people may lose their jobs.

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Good day to you Ms. Rachel~!^^ Success doesn¡¯t come from what you do occasionally, it comes from what you do consistently. Keep pushing, stay focused, and end this week on a high note. You've got this!"

Enjoy the final stretch of the week-your effort today lays the foundation for tomorrow¡¯s success!

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Online shopping is very convenient and reduces our shopping time. 

>>> Online shopping is very convenient and cuts down on the time spent shopping.

However, it has some problems.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

OR>>> However, it does come with a few drawbacks.

 Excessive packaging of products generates waste, which is bad to the environment.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

 Moreover, online shopping doesn¡¯t require salespeople, so many people may lose their jobs.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

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