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Write about the topic: \"Staying Healthy and Active During COVID\".

작성자: 노*철
2025-01-10 1170

회원님의 영작문

My job is that I have to see a patients while looking at mouth.
But I am the healthiest and least prone to disease in my family.
One of the biggest reasons why I can stay healthy is that I wash well.
I wear gloves to treat my patients, but I always wash my hands clean after I treat my patients.
And when I get home, the first thing I do is to take a clean shower from head to foot.
I always wash my hands and feet thoroughly after a close outing.
The first principle of health is cleanliness.
During Covid, I tried to keep my mind and body healthy through stretching and yoga at home because it was difficult to exercise outside.
Even if I stay indoors for a long time, I don't lie down in bed except for sleeping time, and I read a lot of books and watched a lot of Netflix movies for my own inner knowledge.
I watched a movie with my family and tried to improve each other's relationship.
I wish I had played an instrument like a violin at that time.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

David, this is such a well-written and thoughtful reflection on your habits and values. It's wonderful to see how much care you take in staying healthy and productive. Keep it up. You’re inspiring!


~ T. Lia


My job is that I have to see a patients while looking at mouth. 

>> My job involves examining patients while looking at their mouths.


But I am the healthiest and least prone to disease in my family. 

>> CORRECT


One of the biggest reasons why I can stay healthy is that I wash well. 

>> One of the biggest reasons I stay healthy is my good hygiene.


I wear gloves to treat my patients, but I always wash my hands clean after I treat my patients. 

>> I wear gloves when treating my patients, but I always wash my hands thoroughly afterward.


And when I get home, the first thing I do is to take a clean shower from head to foot. 

>> When I get home, the first thing I do is take a thorough shower from head to toe.


I always wash my hands and feet thoroughly after a close outing. 

>> CORRECT


The first principle of health is cleanliness. 

>> CORRECT


During Covid, I tried to keep my mind and body healthy through stretching and yoga at home because it was difficult to exercise outside. 

>> CORRECT


Even if I stay indoors for a long time, I don't lie down in bed except for sleeping time, and I read a lot of books and watched a lot of Netflix movies for my own inner knowledge. 

>> Even when staying indoors for a long time, I avoided lying in bed except during sleep and spent time reading books and watching Netflix movies to enrich my knowledge.


I watched a movie with my family and tried to improve each other's relationship. 

>> I watched movies with my family to strengthen our relationships.


I wish I had played an instrument like a violin at that time. 

>> CORRECT








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