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1. Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen.
2. Sun¡¯s heat and lightning are the two natural causes of wildfires.
3. The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment of the Indian Premier League.
4. Many players have been accused of fixing matches.
5. Many environmentalists have raised concerns over the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.

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1. Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen.
>>Edison had become totally deaf by the time he turned fifteen.
2. Sun¡¯s heat and lightning are the two natural causes of wildfires.
>>Correct
3. The huge popularity of the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment of the Indian Premier League.
>>Correct
4. Many players have been accused of fixing matches.
>>Correct
5. Many environmentalists have raised concerns over the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.
>>Many environmentalists have raised concerns about the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.
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