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What¡¯s something you¡¯ve been meaning to buy but haven¡¯t gotten around to yet?

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I have many things what I want to buy.
One of those is a machine that bushes dogs fur and vacume it at once.
Because, these days my dog changes her fur clothe to new one. So, I¡¯m a little bit painful.
I would like to love flying her fur in the air. However, It is not equal between my mind and my thought. So, I¡¯ve been meaning to buy this machine but I couldn¡¯t sure that is worth it. And the function is same as my thought. As a result, I haven¡¯t gotten around to buying it, yet. I still hesitate buing it.

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Hi, Stella! I think that machine is quite pricey, and I'm not sure if it's worth it. You might want to check some reviews from people who bought it and see if it's really effective. ^^ I hope you can decide soon. Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Jewel
I have many things what I want to buy.
>>I have many things I want to buy.
One of those is a machine that bushes dogs fur and vacume it at once.
>>One of them is a machine that brushes dogs' fur and vacuums it at the same time.
Because, these days my dog changes her fur clothe to new one. 
>>Because these days my dog is shedding her fur and growing a new coat.
So, I¡¯m a little bit painful.
>>So, I'm feeling a little bit of pain.
I would like to love flying her fur in the air. 
>>I would love to see her fur flying in the air.
However, It is not equal between my mind and my thought. 
>>However, my feelings and thoughts are not aligned.
So, I¡¯ve been meaning to buy this machine but I couldn¡¯t sure that is worth it. 
>>So, I¡¯ve been meaning to buy this machine, but I¡¯m not sure if it¡¯s worth it.
And the function is same as my thought.
>>And its function is the same as what I thought.
As a result, I haven¡¯t gotten around to buying it, yet. 
>>As a result, I haven¡¯t gotten around to buying it yet.
I still hesitate buing it.
>>I still hesitate to buy it.
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