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What are some typical misconceptions people have about you?

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Most people that I meet for the first time told me that I will consult them well. They said I would accept any prank they played. And I have quite a lot of experience, even though Korean society mostly doesn't talk to people walking by the street.
In korea, regardless of the age, people use honorifics to those who see each other first time. I don't like that people who are not close to each other say informally, but some people say that.
However, there is clear advantage of that like a double edge of sword. My boyfriend said he fell in love with me when he saw me greet him with a big smile. haha
Anyway,I am stubborn and have high self-esteem. Therefore, it is difficult to be truly close to me. Because my standards for personality and style of a person are very high. So on the outside, small talk accepts me, but it can be difficult to be truly close to me. Therefore, I don't think anyone who knows me a little bit doesn't give me side well. I also say that I have a high wall of heart.

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Hello,Seo Yeon!~
I was surprised to see that you composed a longer composition this time. And I must add that you never fail to share something about your personal encounter which I always appreciate. I hope you won't get tired of doing it :))  You are doing great!
Chammy
Most people that I meet for the first time told me that I will consult them well. 
>> Most people that I met for the first time told me that I would consult them well. 
They said I would accept any prank they played. 
OR
>> They claimed that could take with any trick they pulled.
And I have quite a lot of experience, even though Korean society mostly doesn't talk to people walking by the street.
OR
>> Despite the fact that most Koreans avoid interacting with strangers on the street, I have a good deal of experience.
In korea, regardless of the age, people use honorifics to those who see each other first time. 
>> In Korea, regardless of age, people use honorifics for those who see each other for the first time. 
I don't like that people who are not close to each other say informally, but some people say that.
OR
>> I don't like people who talk casually to someone they are not close with although it's fine for some.
However, there is clear advantage of that like a double edge of sword. 
>> However, there is a clear advantage of that like a double edge of a sword. 
My boyfriend said he fell in love with me when he saw me greet him with a big smile. haha Anyway, I am stubborn and have high self-esteem.
>> Correct
Therefore, it is difficult to be truly close to me. Because my standards for personality and style of a person are very high. 
OR
>> It is challenging to get genuinely close to me because I have set high standards for the type of person's personality.
So on the outside, small talk accepts me, but it can be difficult to be truly close to me. 
OR
>>I may appear accommodating to small talk but practically it would still be difficult to be truly close to me. 
Therefore, I don't think anyone who knows me a little bit doesn't give me side well. I also say that I have a high wall of heart.
>> Therefore, I don't think anyone who knows me a little bit doesn't give me a side well. I also say that I have a high wall of heart.
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