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Do you think action movies influence people to commit crimes?

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I don't think people commit crimes. I think action movies don't have much influence on crime. But for kids, i think it have much influence on a growing season. If kids often watch action movies, it will affect their brains.

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Good morning Jun!
I like the way you expand your thoughts. I agree that people don't commit crimes due to action movies that they see, however, for growing kids, TV or movies have a great influence on their personalities.
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~


I don't think people commit crimes
>>> CORRECT!

 I think action movies don't have much influence on crime.
>>> CORRECT!

But for kids, i think it have much influence on a growing season.
>>> But for kids, I think it has much influence on a growing season.

If kids often watch action movies, it will affect their brains.
>>> CORRECT!

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