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Skills or strengh

작성자: 송*훈
2025-01-18 946

회원님의 영작문



Thank you for asking this interesting question!
It remind me when I first, started 'Kendo.' My master taught me many lessons about strength and skills at that time.
Have nice weekends and I am looking forward to see you!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Diego!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

One idea from martial arts is that skill can overcome strength in a fight. Which of those would you like to improve personally? Your skill or your strength?

 

It is difficult to answer because both strength and skill are important in martial arts. However, if there is only one thing I have to choose, I would rather choice ‘skill.’

>> It is difficult to answer because both strength and skill are important in martial arts. However, if there is only one thing I have to choose, I would rather choose ‘skill.’


I believe skill is much harder to achieve. 

>> CORRECT!

When you are learning something, not just martial arts, musical instruments, sports or knowledge, you have to practice repeatably. 

>> When you are learning something, not just martial arts, musical instruments, sports or knowledge, you have to practice repeatedly

As a well-known soccer player, mentioned that he kicked the ball thousands of times to achieve one skill. 

>> CORRECT!

It is a procedure that imprinting specific action in your body and memories, so that your body can reflectionally act to certain situations. 

>> It is a procedure that imprinting specific action in your body and memories, so that your body can reflectively act to certain situations. 

Achieving skills requires a rough time and many failures.

>> CORRECT!

Strength can be achieved easily. 

>> CORRECT!

When you repeat some actions, at first, it will be unfamiliar and inconvenient. 

>> CORRECT!

Because you don’t have muscles which let you execute certain actions. 

>> It's because you don’t have muscles which let you execute certain actions.

However, if you keep going on those actions you slowly get muscles time to time. 

>> CORRECT!

After that, you might feel lighter, faster and stronger.

>> CORRECT!

So, you don’t have to give an effort to gain strength deliberately. 

>> CORRECT!

Strength will follow naturally as you keep working on certain actions. 

>> CORRECT!

However, achieving skills is different. 

>> CORRECT!

It won’t follow your will until you carve in your body.

>> CORRECT!


[Your master taught you well when it comes to strength and skills. I totally I agree that when you practice a certain skill, everything will definitely fall into place. :) ~ T. Camille ]


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