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If I go out with my mom, I usually find restaurant that I think my mom will love. Because she don't like smell of fish or meet.
If I go out with my father, I usually find restaurant of which food is enough to my father.
If I go out with my friends, I usually find restaurant for new or fresh food near the place we will meet.

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Hey there, Kelly! Great job on your writing today! You did well expressing your thoughts about choosing restaurants for different people. Keep practicing your sentence structure, and it'll get even better. Keep up the good work!
~T. Jenna

If I go out with my mom, I usually find restaurant that I think my mom will love. Because she don't like smell of fish or meet.
>> If I go out with my mom, I usually find a restaurant that I think my mom will love because she doesn't like the smell of fish or meat.
OR
>> When I go out with my mom, I typically choose a restaurant that I believe she would enjoy, as she is sensitive to the scent of fish or meat.
If I go out with my father, I usually find restaurant of which food is enough to my father.
>>If I go out with my father, I usually find a restaurant whose food is enough for him.
OR
>>When I dine out with my father, I typically choose a restaurant where the portions are ample for him.
If I go out with my friends, I usually find restaurant for new or fresh food near the place we will meet.
>>If I go out with my friends, I usually find a restaurant that serves new or fresh food near the place where we will meet.
OR
>>When I go out with my friends, I often choose a restaurant that offers fresh or innovative cuisine near our meeting spot.
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