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1. Lead is the heaviest of all metals. (heavy)
2. Lead is heavier than any other metal. (heavy)
3. Prevention is better than cure. (good)
4. The Eiffel Tower is taller than Kutub Minar. (tall)
5. My laptop is more expensive than yours. (expensive)

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Hello Yumin,


We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.

I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.

T. Jeny


1. Lead is the heaviest of all metals. (heavy)
>>correct
2. Lead is heavier than any other metal. (heavy)
>>correct
3. Prevention is better than cure. (good)
>>correct
4. The Eiffel Tower is taller than Kutub Minar. (tall)
>>correct
5. My laptop is more expensive than yours. (expensive)
>>correct
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