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What is a good friend for me?

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2025-01-20 884

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Good friend is talking easily about my worries.
Good friend listens carefully my story and advices well as if it was her(or his) story.
I have a good friend, so when I have a hard time, I ask for help to her.

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Hi Kara! 

Good friends for me are the people who will always have your back but never tolerate wrongdoings. 
People that are honest but will also validate your feelings. 
Good freinds are rare to fins, so if you have one, keep them. 

Andrea 

Good friend is talking easily about my worries.
>> A good friend is someone who, you can easily talk to when something worries you. 

Good friend listens carefully my story and advices well as if it was her(or his) story.
>> Good friend listens carefully to my story and give good advice as if it was her(or his) story.

I have a good friend, so when I have a hard time, I ask for help to her.
>> I have a good friend so if I am having a hard time, I ask for her help. 
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