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Discuss your earliest memory as a child.

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My hometown, Daegu, is famous for not getting much snow in South Korea. However, when I was young, there was a rare snowfall that accumulated about 10 cm. It was the first time I had ever seen so much snow, and I was so happy. I made a snowman with my younger sister and parents. Whenever it snows, I remember that day.

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Hello, Ms. Jinny!^^
When I was in third grade, I recall the day in my hometown when it poured ice cubes. Since it was so unusual, the government actually announced a postponement of classes~ Hehehe
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My hometown, Daegu, is famous for not getting much snow in South Korea.
Or
>> Daegu, where I'm from, is well-known in South Korea for experiencing very little snowfall.
However, when I was young, there was a rare snowfall that accumulated about 10 cm.
Or
>> But there was an infrequent snowfall when I was a child that collected roughly 10 cm.
 It was the first time I had ever seen so much snow, and I was so happy.
>>Correct
 I made a snowman with my younger sister and parents. Whenever it snows, I remember that day.
Or
>> Together with my parents and younger sister, we built a snowman. I vividly recall that day whenever it snows.
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