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In my case, I somtimes met to children of friends. I gave them gifts of books, clothes, cakes, and so on, but sometimes I did't prepare any gifts, so I gave them some money. At that time I feel shamed. It is not kind because I don't think about what they want. I tried to talk to them about their interests, enjoy in desert time and do what they want. I think the best gift for youngsters is that they have good remember to me.

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Take a moment today to reflect on the small victories you¡¯ve had so far this week, Ms. Ella. Maybe it was crossing off an important task or simply staying positive in the face of difficulty. No accomplishment is too small to celebrate. Gratitude fuels motivation and helps shift your mindset from what¡¯s lacking to what¡¯s possible.
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In my case, I sometimes met to children of friends.
>>> In my case, I sometimes meet the children of my friends.
 I gave them gifts of books, clothes, cakes, and so on, but sometimes I did't prepare any gifts, so I gave them some money. 
>>> I would often give them gifts like books, clothes, and cakes, but on occasion, when I didn¡¯t have anything prepared, I¡¯d give them money instead.
At that time I feel shamed.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 It is not kind because I don't think about what they want. 
>>> I'm not sure of what to give because I don't know what they need or want.
I tried to talk to them about their interests, enjoy in dessert time and do what they want.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 I think the best gift for youngsters is that they have good remember to me.
>> I think the best gift for youngsters is that they have can have a good remembrance of me.
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