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People act to hear the answers from people because they each have an answer they want.

We will be the ones who can observe people for a long time and quickly find the answers they want. Finally, we will be the ones who can give them the answers they want.
After all, humans and social animals learn to say what other humans want.

So if you can listen to others and say what you want, it means we are becoming a good socialite.

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Hello Dahea,

I¡¯m so proud of how much you¡¯ve improved in your English skills!  You¡¯ve done such a great job with your homework, and it¡¯s clear that your hard work and effort are paying off. You¡¯ve grown so much, and your ability to express deep thoughts and ideas in English is really impressive. Keep up the fantastic work! Your dedication will take you far, and I¡¯m lucky to be your teacher!

~Teacher Cathy

 

People act to hear the answers from people because they each have an answer they want.

>>CORRECT

OR>>People ask to hear answers from others because each person has an answer they want to hear.

We will be the ones who can observe people for a long time and quickly find the answers they want.

>>CORRECT

OR>>We will be the ones who can observe people for a long time and quickly identify the answers they seek.

Finally, we will be the ones who can give them the answers they want.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Finally, we will be the ones who can provide them with the answers they seek.

After all, humans and social animals learn to say what other humans want.

>>CORRECT

OR>>After all, humans, as social animals, learn to say what others want to hear.

So if you can listen to others and say what you want, it means we are becoming a good socialite.

>>So, if you can listen to others and say what you want, it means we are becoming good socialites.

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