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Motivation comes from the interest of close people.

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The word motivation always reminds me of my precious people.
It gives me strength when I think that many people, including my family and friends, wish me happiness.
No matter what adversity comes and what difficulties I face in my future life, I will continue to be a person who can move forward.

Sir, thank you for always worrying and caring about my work like a family.
Your words motivated me a lot.
Until you and I meet again, I hope you always hear good news.

Actually, I still can't believe it as I am writing this, but I want to become a better student and meet my teacher.

I hope you are always happy and have a good day.

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Hello there,

Your words are incredibly heartfelt and moving. The way you draw motivation from the love and support of those close to you shows the depth of your character and your appreciation for the people in your life. It's inspiring to see how you channel their encouragement into strength to overcome challenges and move forward with determination.

I'm so glad my words have motivated you, and I deeply appreciate the kind thoughts you've shared. You're already an amazing student, and I'm confident you'll continue to grow and achieve wonderful things. Keep believing in yourself, Dahea. You have so much potential!

~Teacher Cathy

 

The word motivation always reminds me of my precious people.

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OR>>The word "motivation" always brings to mind my cherished loved ones.

It gives me strength when I think that many people, including my family and friends, wish me happiness.

>>CORRECT

OR>>It strengthens me to know that many people, including my family and friends, wish me happiness.

No matter what adversity comes and what difficulties I face in my future life, I will continue to be a person who can move forward.

>>CORRECT

OR>>No matter what challenges or difficulties I encounter in the future, I will remain someone who can keep moving forward.

Sir, thank you for always worrying and caring about my work like a family.

>>Teacher, thank you for always worrying and caring about my work like a family.

Your words motivated me a lot.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Your words inspired me greatly.

Until you and I meet again, I hope you always hear good news.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Until we meet again, I hope you are always surrounded by good news.

Actually, I still can't believe it as I am writing this, but I want to become a better student and meet my teacher.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I can hardly believe it as I write this, but I truly want to become a better student and meet my teacher.

I hope you are always happy and have a good day.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I hope you¡¯re always happy and have a wonderful day.

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