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Homework & Question

작성자: 이*주
2025-01-26 1368

회원님의 영작문

I'm sorry, teacher. I was mistaken. ‘-ssi’ usually add after name to my co-workers or subordinate at work.


I will go to my brother’s house with my mother. And I will play near it. I am excited!


1. three kinds of holidays - national holidays, special working holidays, special non-working holidays
-> Right? And I have to put ‘s’ on the back of ‘holiday’, right?
a kind = one kind
-> Right?
2. direct speech - She said, “I will be there at 5.m.” , She called him the “Lebron James” of Korea. etc.
-> Right?
3. straightened -> Can't I pronounce ‘t’ sound?
possible -> Should I pronounce ‘po’ as ‘pa’ and ‘ssi’ as ‘ssu’?
modify -> Should I pronounce ‘mo’ as ‘ma’ and ‘di’ as ‘ru’?
4. They are not same meaning. / It’s only called.
-> This sentence structure is not correct. Right?
5. He was shot from behind as he ran away.
->Why is ‘behind’ adverb in this sentence?
6. I will spend Lunar new year and Christmas holidays abroad.
->I can't use ‘holidays’ as ‘holiday’ here. Right?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Minju! I hope you had a great weekend. Your questions show that you are really focusing on the lesson. Let us talk more if you have other clarifications in the class.See you!
--Teacher Anji

I will go to my brother’s house with my mother. And I will play near it. I am excited!
>> CORRECT

1. three kinds of holidays - national holidays, special working holidays, special non-working holidays
-> Right? And I have to put ‘s’ on the back of ‘holiday’, right?
>> CORRECT
a kind = one kind
-> Right?
>> CORRECT
2. direct speech - She said, “I will be there at 5.m.” , She called him the “Lebron James” of Korea. etc.
-> Right?
>> She said, “I will be there at 5.m.”  - direct speech ( You repeat what someone said exactly.)
>> She called him the “Lebron James” of Korea. = (Not a direct speech but "Lebron James" is used symbolically or metaphorically,not directly saying someone is Lebron James"
3. straightened -> Can't I pronounce ‘t’ sound?
> You may or may not pronounce the t sound. 
possible -> Should I pronounce ‘po’ as ‘pa’ and ‘ssi’ as ‘ssu’?
>> possible - [ pos-uh-buhl ] (you may pronounce them as pa or ssu but not too obvious. Try to make the sound more subtle)
modify -> Should I pronounce ‘mo’ as ‘ma’ and ‘di’ as ‘ru’?
>> modify - [ mod-uh-fahy ] (no, you can't pronounce mo as ma because, in this case, di is di, not ri in this word)
4. They are not same meaning. / It’s only called.
-> This sentence structure is not correct. Right?'
>> CORRECT
5. He was shot from behind as he ran away.
->Why is ‘behind’ adverb in this sentence?
>> Behind here modifies the word shot, a verb. You can use behind as a preposition like in this sentence: He was behind him at the restaurant. 
6. I will spend Lunar new year and Christmas holidays abroad.
->I can't use ‘holidays’ as ‘holiday’ here. Right?
>> Yes, because you are talking about two different holidays.
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