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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: How will you celebrate the upcoming Lunar New Year?


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Maybe I will go to my in-laws' home and my hometown. We are planning to make traditional food for the ancestral rites. My in-laws' home doesn¡¯t have many people and is not very active, so I will have to spend some boring time there, except for my daughter, because she can play games and watch YouTube all day. On the other hand, my hometown family has many people, and we are active and noisy. Every Lunar New Year is also my father's birthday, so we have a birthday party. Cutting the cake is a very important event for the gift presentation ceremony.

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Hello, Ms. Nara! I hope you were able to enjoy your three-day holiday. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Maybe I will go to my in-laws' home and my hometown. 
>>I might visit my in-laws' place and my hometown.
We are planning to make traditional food for the ancestral rites. 
>>Correct!
My in-laws' home doesn¡¯t have many people and is not very active, so I will have to spend some boring time there, except for my daughter, because she can play games and watch YouTube all day. 
>>My in-laws' house is quiet and doesn¡¯t have much going on, so it might be a bit dull for me, but not for my daughter because she can play games and watch YouTube all day. 
On the other hand, my hometown family has many people, and we are active and noisy. 
>>On the other hand, my family in my hometown is much larger, and we¡¯re quite energetic and noisy.
Every Lunar New Year is also my father's birthday, so we have a birthday party. 
>>Since every Lunar New Year is also my father¡¯s birthday, we celebrate with a birthday party.
Cutting the cake is a very important event for the gift presentation ceremony.
>>The cake-cutting moment is significant for the gift-giving tradition.
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