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What are the things you expect from the class ?

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2025-02-03 1924

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First of all, I'd like to say thank you for being my English teacher
and giving me a writing task " What are the things I expect from the class".
I wanted to say about the things that I expect from the class today morning but my English speaking skill is too poor to have asked you about that.
So, to be honest, it is more convenient to say throudh writing than speaking.
As I told you, I have three years left before my retirement and after retirement, I'd like to travel around the world so I started learning English at the early last year.
But even if I have been doing my best,my English is still very poor.
I don't know if because I am too old to learn English.
So I will do my besy to study but I don't expect too much from the class.
I want my English to improve litte by little whlie I am studying with you and know all about the Philippines.
And also I hope you to have a good memory about me and Korea during the class.

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Hi, Sun Ho^^
Thank you for answering the question. 
I'll try my best to help you improve your English skills.
Let's work together. 
_T. SHAY^^
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First of all, I'd like to say thank you for being my English teacher

and giving me a writing task " What are the things I expect from the class".
>>
First of all, I'd like to say thank you for being my English teacher
and giving me the writing task  about the things I expect from the class.

I wanted to say about the things that I expect from the class today morning but my English speaking skill is too poor to have asked you about that.
>>I wanted to tell you the things I expect from the class, but I wasn't able to express my thoughts well.
So, to be honest, it is more convenient to say throudh writing than speaking.
>>So, to be honest, it is more convenient to say it through writing than speaking.
As I told you, I have three years left before my retirement and after retirement, I'd like to travel around the world so I started learning English at the early last year.
>>As I told you, I have three years left before my retirement and after retirement, I'd like to travel around the world, so I started learning English at the beginning of the year 2024.
But even if I have been doing my best,my English is still very poor.
>>But even if I have been doing my best, my English is still very poor.
I don't know if because I am too old to learn English.
>>I don't know if it's because I am too old to learn English.
So I will do my besy to study but I don't expect too much from the class.
>>So, I will do my best to study, but I don't expect too much from the class. 
I want my English to improve litte by little whlie I am studying with you and know all about the Philippines.
>>I want my English skills to improve gradually while studying with you and knowing more about the Philippines.
And also I hope you to have a good memory about me and Korea during the class.
>>
And also I hope you have a good memory of me and my country throughout the class. 

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