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Are you good at comforting someone? What is the best way to comfort someone who just broke up with h

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I think that I am not good at comforting someone. I don't know how to comforting someone. I want someone let me know good ways.
If my friend broke up with her boyfriend, I will say her "Forget him. he was not your thing. You are good woman, so you will meet more good boyfriend. Cheer up!"
But I don't know this way is good. Other people how to comforting someone.

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Ms. Eva!
I guess people have their ways of comforting someone. Some people just keep quiet and listen, while others prefer listening and talking. However, did you know that your presence alone when somebody needs to be comforted matters? 
Thank you for this and may your day be great!
Aki!

I think that I am not good at comforting someone.
>> CORRECT!

I don't know how to comforting someone.
>>> I don't know how to comfort someone.

I want someone let me know good ways.
>>> I want someone to let me know how.

If my friend broke up with her boyfriend, I will say her "Forget him. he was not your thing.
>>>  If my friend broke up with her boyfriend, I just tell her to forget him because he is not her thing.

You are good woman, so you will meet more good boyfriend. Cheer up!"
>>>  You are a good woman, so you will meet more good boyfriends. Cheer up!"
>>> She is a good woman and will meet more guys.

But I don't know this way is good. Other people how to comforting someone.
>> But I don't know if this way is good, other people know how to comfort someone.
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