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What makes a conversation interesting ?

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There would be a lot of things make a conversation interesting.
Among them, I think the topic of conversation is the most important.
The topic should be selected as something that everyone joining the conversation is interested in.
If so, everyone is willing to participate in the conversation and the atmosphere would be pleasant.
And next is the listening attitude.
When I talk to some people, if they listen to me and show interest in my thoughts, I would feel happy and valued
And the last is that if I conversate with someone I like, the conversation would be interesting to me.

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Hi, Sun Ho^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
I agree with all of it. 
_T. SHAY^^
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There would be a lot of things make a conversation interesting.
>>There are a lot of things that make a conversation interesting.
Among them, I think the topic of conversation is the most important.
>>Among them, I think the topic of the conversation is the most important.
The topic should be selected as something that everyone joining the conversation is interested in.
>>Correct
OR: The topic should be something that everyone involved in the conversation can relate with.

If so, everyone is willing to participate in the conversation and the atmosphere would be pleasant.
>>Correct
OR: In that case, everyone will participate and join the conversation which creates a good atmosphere. 

And next is the listening attitude.
>>And the next thing is the listening attitude.
OR: Another important thing is being a good listener. 
When I talk to some people, if they listen to me and show interest in my thoughts, I would feel happy and valued
>>When I talk to some people and they listen to me and show interest in my thoughts, I would feel happy and valued.
And the last is that if I conversate with someone I like, the conversation would be interesting to me.
>>And the last thing is that if I conversate with someone I like, the conversation would be interesting to me.
OR: The last thing is interest. A person who is interested in someone can easily enjoy the conversation with that person.

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