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I`m planning to travel to hawaii for marrige trip this April.
I`m really looking forward that day.
And I`d like to use English when I go there
That`s why I start this English course again.

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Hello Dino,

Here is a thought that you may ponder on:

"The object of education is to prepare the young to educate themselves throughout their lives.

In our daily activities, we can learn new things.

Preparing yourself with all the challenges in life is just a trial for you to move forward.

In this way, you will find yourself, knowing that you've learn a lot."

T. Jeny


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>>I am planning to travel to Hawaii for my honeymoon this April.
I`m really looking forward that day.
>>I`m really looking forward to that day.
And I`d like to use English when I go there
>>correct
That`s why I start this English course again.
>>That`s why I started this English course again.
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