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Which is more difficult : to apologize or forgive someone who has hurt you?

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I think forgiving someone who has hurt me is more difficult than apologizing. Because there are various ways to apologize, but there is only one way to forgive. And the memory is still in my mind and it makes remind it though I already forgive that.
Of course, I think I can be free only when I forgive. However, the person who is sorry thinks that however the heart is sincere, he or she can overcome his or her wrongdoing because of the fact that he or she apologized.

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Hello, Seo Yeon!
I was impressed by how quickly you completed your composition.~ Hahahaha,., thank you so much!
I think forgiving someone who has hurt me is more difficult than apologizing. 
OR
>> I find it harder to forgive someone who has wronged me than to apologize.
Because there are various ways to apologize, but there is only one way to forgive. 
OR
>>Since forgiveness can only be done in a single approach, there are several ways to apologize.
And the memory is still in my mind and it makes remind it though I already forgive that.
>> The memory remains in my mind and will remind me of that even though it has been forgiven
Of course, I think I can be free only when I forgive.
OR
>> I believe that only forgiveness will set me free.
However, the person who is sorry thinks that however the heart is sincere, he or she can overcome his or her wrongdoing because of the fact that he or she apologized.
OR
>>Some people believe that by apologizing, they may still go past their wrongdoing, regardless of their true feelings.
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