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> Since you have experienced being a foreign student yourself, what do you think universities must h

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There must be a mentor/mentee program to accommodate foreign students successfully. This accommodation is for both country and society. Many foreign students have issues with bureaucracies such as visiting city councils for registration and bank for bank account. If the country is English speaking nations, many foreign students might have less difficulties because an average people can also speak English fluently. However, in non-English speaking nations, many foreign students can face communication issues. Even though many foreign students learn language before entering university or there might be some students who took entrance exam in their native language, the language spoken in academic and actual life differs greatly. Therefore, there must be experienced locals who assist foreign students to launch their university life. When I first entered university, there was no one assisting me, so I had to navigate every step by myself which took a lot of time.

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Thank you for this Aciel! Keep them coming. :D

There must be a mentor/mentee program to accommodate foreign students successfully. 
>>> correct 
This accommodation is for both country and society. 
>>> correct  
Many foreign students have issues with bureaucracies such as visiting city councils for registration and bank for bank account. 
>>>   OR: Many foreign students have issues with bureaucracies such as visiting city councils for registration and the bank for their bank accounts. 
If the country is English speaking nations, many foreign students might have less difficulties because an average people can also speak English fluently. 
>>> If the country is an English speaking nation, many foreign students might have less difficulties because majority of the people can also speak English fluently.  
However, in non-English speaking nations, many foreign students can face communication issues. 
>>>  correct   
Even though many foreign students learn language before entering university or there might be some students who took entrance exam in their native language, the language spoken in academic and actual life differs greatly. 
>>> OR: Even though many foreign students learn the local language before entering university or there might be some students who took the entrance exam in their native language, the language spoken in academic and actual life differs greatly.  
Therefore, there must be experienced locals who assist foreign students to launch their university life. 
>>>  OR:  Therefore, there must be experienced locals who can assist foreign students to kick off their university life. 
When I first entered university, there was no one assisting me, so I had to navigate every step by myself which took a lot of time.
>>> correct      
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