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When I watch the news about people of martial law including Yoon president. I feel disappointed .

Nobody apologized their faults and crime.

Furthermore, it looks mean their attitude making of excuses and denial of their intention despite everyone know that.

It is ridiculous that they interpreted in their favor even legal.

I think that Korea education have been failed with watching their shamelessness.

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Ms. Lily!
You feel that way becuase you know your role in society. It is undeniable that your concern is not for your personal interest but for the welfare of many.
I hope that your government would continue considering the voice of its citizens.
Have  good afternoon!
Aki~


When I watch the news about people of martial law including Yoon president. I feel disappointed .
>>> When I watch the news about people involved in martial law, including President Yoon, I feel disappointed. 

Nobody apologized their faults and crime.
>>> None of them have apologized for their faults or crimes. 

Furthermore, it looks mean their attitude making of excuses and denial of their intention despite everyone know that.
>> CORRECT! 
OR >>> Furthermore, their attitude of making excuses and denying their intentions, despite everyone knowing the truth, is disheartening.

It is ridiculous that they interpreted in their favor even legal.
>>>  It's ridiculous that they interpret the situation in their favor, even legally.

I think that Korea education have been failed with watching their shamelessness.
>>   I believe Korea's education system has failed when I see their shamelessness
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