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I want to tell someone who starts to learn speaking English.
Speaking English is harder than you imagin.
You will get stressed while studying.
But don\'t quit your English academy.
You don\'t need to study hard .
But you shouldn\'t be exhausted .
Only you have to do is studying longer and then wait.
Someday it will be your hobby,habit and be interesting.

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Ms. Sunny!
Nice! I agree with what you wrote here. Many people are already quitting at that start. They are not halfway yet, but they are already thinking that it is hard. These people don't reach anything. Take note to include; E-N-J-O-Y in everything you do.
Aki~


I want to tell someone who starts to learn speaking English.
>>> I want to tell someone who has started to learn to speak English.

Speaking English is harder than you imagine.
>>> Speaking English is harder than what you thought.

You will get stressed while studying.
>>> CORRECT!

But don\'t quit your English academy.
>>> But don't quit your English academy.
>>> But don't quit attending your English academy.

You don't need to study hard .
>>> CORRECT!

But you shouldn\'t be exhausted .
>>> So you won't get exhausted.
>>> But don't be too lax.

Only you have to do is studying longer and then wait.
>>> Only you have to do is study longer and then wait.

Someday it will be your hobby,habit and be interesting.
>>> Someday, it will become your habit, and find your interest in it.

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