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In 5 sentences, please write your expectations from the class and from the teacher

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Through this class, I expect I feel more comfortable in using English. It had not been easy for me to continue the conversation with foreigners at work when the conversation deepens. I think it is because that the words and the patterns to express my thoughts are quite limited. I usually see that the words I need are not that difficult but I find it not easy to combine those simple words to lead the conversation. As I decided to take my times and efforts to study English again, I hope I could deliver my thoughts in my head out of my mouth in English more fluently.

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Hi Kylie!
Thank you for your composition today.
Your expectations are noted.
Let's work together to achieve our goals.
Please review the corrections below.
Ask during the class if you have any questions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Through this class, I expect I feel more comfortable in using English. 
>> Through this class, I expect to feel more comfortable using English.
It had not been easy for me to continue the conversation with foreigners at work when the conversation deepens. 
>> It has not been easy for me to continue conversations with foreigners at work when the conversation deepens.
I think it is because that the words and the patterns to express my thoughts are quite limited. 
>> I think it is because the words and patterns I use to express my thoughts are quite limited.
I usually see that the words I need are not that difficult but I find it not easy to combine those simple words to lead the conversation. 
>> I usually notice that the words I need are not that difficult, but I find it hard to combine those simple words to lead the conversation.
As I decided to take my times and efforts to study English again, I hope I could deliver my thoughts in my head out of my mouth in English more fluently.
>> Since I have decided to take the time and effort to study English again, I hope I can express my thoughts more fluently in English.



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