무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Homework4

작성자: 김*
2025-02-16 1051

회원님의 영작문

My grandparents used to run a small market. When I was a child, I love to go to my grandparents market, becuase I could eat all the snacks for free. They allowed me to eat snacks that I want. Once in really warm summer, I brought one ice cream and went out. That ice cream was my favourite one. I closed my eyes and tried to lick it one time while I was walking. Then I heard the sound which is someone try to hold back laughter. I was thinking like "What is he laughing for?" and I passed by him. After then, I knew my ice cream was gone. It was on the gournd already. I just held the cone. Actually he was laughing for falling down my ice cream. I was crying somehow, it was a big embarrassing moment for a child. The good thing was my grandmother gave me a new one. Even though it was a long time ago, I still remember this situation. haha

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Geon^^
I believe most kids experienced some embarrassing things. 
It's pretty normal especially for kids. 
Thank you for sharing that memory. ^^
_T. SHAY^^
***

My grandparents used to run a small market.
>>Correct
OR: My grandparents ran a small market years ago.

When I was a child, I love to go to my grandparents market, becuase I could eat all the snacks for free.
>>
When I was a child, I loved to go to my grandparents' store/shop because I could eat all the snacks for free.
They allowed me to eat snacks that I want.
>>
They allowed me to eat the snacks that I want.
OR: They let me eat the snacks I want.
Once in really warm summer, I brought one ice cream and went out.
>>
One warm summer day, I got one ice cream and went out.
That ice cream was my favourite one.
>>
Correct
OR: The ice cream I had at that time was my favorite.
I closed my eyes and tried to lick it one time while I was walking.
>>Correct
OR: While I was walking, I tried licking it with my eyes closed.
Then I heard the sound which is someone try to hold back laughter.
>>Then, I heard someone trying to hold back his laughter.
I was thinking like "What is he laughing for?" and I passed by him.
>>Correct
OR: I thought, "What is he laughing about"? and I continued walking.
After then, I knew my ice cream was gone.
>>After that, I realized my ice cream was gone.
It was on the gournd already.

>>It was on the ground.
OR: It fell on the ground.

I just held the cone.
>>Correct
OR: I was just holding the cone.
Actually he was laughing for falling down my ice cream. 
>>Actually, he was laughing about my ice cream that fell. 
I was crying somehow, it was a big embarrassing moment for a child.
>>Then I cried. It was the most embarrassing moment for  a kid.
The good thing was my grandmother gave me a new one.
>>Correct
OR: Fortunately, my grandmother gave me a new one.
Even though it was a long time ago, I still remember this situation. haha
>>Correct
OR: It may have been a long time, but I still remember it clearly. 

번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
142627 2/19 Homework 권*빈 완료 2025-02-20 1001
142626 Are there many Koreans who change their names ? What is usually... 박*호 완료 2025-02-20 1177
142625 MY MBTI 김*인 완료 2025-02-20 1016
142624 How do you usually handle stress? 김*민 완료 2025-02-20 924
142623 Do you think listening to sad music when you\'re feeling down... 이*준 완료 2025-02-20 953
142622 What kind of prank can you do? 이*준 완료 2025-02-20 1164
142621 My expectations. 송*진 완료 2025-02-20 4
142620 homework 김*은 완료 2025-02-20 1062
142619 homework 김*연 완료 2025-02-19 1
142618 homework 김*연 완료 2025-02-19 0
142617 Homework 김*우 완료 2025-02-19 1
142616 If you had a different major in university, what could it be?... 이*윤 완료 2025-02-19 1179
142615 Something to do 홍*은 완료 2025-02-19 974
142614 Describe tulips. 유*빈 완료 2025-02-19 1013
142613 The homework for February 17th. 조*호 완료 2025-02-19 937
142612 Sleep is the best medicine for our health 김*우 완료 2025-02-19 3
142611 What are the biggest challenges facing each country\'s... 권*진 완료 2025-02-19 3
142610 What are your thoughts on tall people becoming basketball... 차*진 완료 2025-02-19 1034
142609 How have gender roles in Korea changed over the past few decades? 강*율 완료 2025-02-19 2
142608 What’s the best beach to visit in Korea? 송*자 완료 2025-02-19 3

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04