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I attatched the homework file🥰

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회원님의 영작문



Hello Jewel.
Did you spend good time on weekends?
My son was finished his piano performance well even though he had some mistakes about 2 times. It didn’t matter of the geat performance.
I attatched the homework file.
Have a good day.🙌🏻

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Stella! Your son's skill highlights how his positive energy and kindness can have a great impact on the people around him. Making others happy can often be one of the most valuable and fulfilling things a person can do.^^ Thank you for sharing your insights. 
~T. Jewel
When I saw the homework, I could remember a traditional korea sentence. 
>>When I saw the homework, I remembered a traditional Korean saying.
It is that if you want to show off your child to other people then you must have paid for that. 
>>It means that if you want to show off your child to others, you must have paid for it.
It means that avoid the bragging to the parents. 
>>It means avoiding bragging to other parents.
I think the reason why it might be jealous from other parents.
>>I think the reason might be that other parents feel jealous.
I think there are many good things in my son.
>>I think my son has many good qualities.
OR
>>I think my son possesses many good qualities.
 The best of them is making people who is together with him happy. 
>>The best one is making the people who are with him happy.
My mother and I always tell him that I'm happy with you.
>>My mother and I always tell him that we are happy with him.
 I think we feel like this because we are his family. 
>>I think we feel this way because we are his family.
I didn't know the fact that it's his one of advantages before we met his friends and his teachers.
>>I didn't know that it was one of his strengths before we met his friends and teachers.
 They felt and told same about him as we thought. 
>>They felt the same way about him as we did.
So, I convince that he has a strong possitive things in his inner mind. It make other happy.
>>So, I am convinced that he has strong positive traits in his mind, which make others happy.
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