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Q : What is the most important right a citizen can have?

A : it is definitly freedom. In my opinion, the freedom is most important right for a citizen. For example, in the middle ages, citizens are not having a right to move and other limitation. That is terrible. Humans can be happy by feel freedom. So, i feel happy because i am lived in the Korea which is a democracy country.

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Hello Eddy,

It's great to see you reflecting on such an important topic! I completely agree with your perspective on freedom being the most important right a citizen can have. Freedom allows individuals to make choices, pursue happiness, and live without oppressive restrictions. Your example from the Middle Ages helps to highlight just how valuable freedom is, especially when we think about how people lived under strict limitations.

It¡¯s wonderful that you also appreciate the freedom you have living in a democratic country like Korea. It¡¯s a privilege that not everyone has, and recognizing it shows your gratitude for the rights you enjoy. Keep up the great work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

The homework of 14th Fab.

>>The homework of 14th Feb.

OR>>The homework for February 14th.

it is definitly freedom.

>>It is definitely freedom.

In my opinion, the freedom is most important right for a citizen.

>>CORRECT

OR>>In my opinion, freedom is the most important right a citizen can have.

For example, in the middle ages, citizens are not having a right to move and other limitation.

>>For example, in the Middle Ages, citizens did not have the right to move freely and faced other limitations.

That is terrible.

>>CORRECT

OR>>That is awful.

Humans can be happy by feel freedom.

>>Humans can be happy by feeling free.

So, i feel happy because i am lived in the Korea which is a democracy country.

>>So, I feel happy because I live in Korea, which is a democratic country.

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