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What do you think of blind dates? Does it pose dangers to women?

작성자: 이*중
2025-02-18 1175

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Before I met my girlfriend in the blind date, I had doubts about meeting a person who I didn't know and preferred to meet a girl in daily life, naturally.
Because I thought that people choose someone they like by only appearance in a blind date.
It's very narrow sight to decide who she is.
So, when I got some suggestion of a blind date, I usually refused it.

Some people can ask me how did you accept the blind data you met your girlfriend.
Actually, I didn't have to think about meeting someone in 2022.
But senior who was my laboratory leader suggested the blind date.
I couldn't refuse that suggestion because he is my senior scientist.

If I think about it now, I really appreciate it.
It was a chance to meet my girlfriend who is really lovely.

These days, I recommend blind dates to others in my team.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Lee!
Wow, then I guess it was meant to be.
Not all blind dates have a successful rate even if they were introduced by meaningful friends.
Cherish the moment!
T. Aki~


Before I met my girlfriend ON the blind date, I had doubts about meeting a person who I didn't know and preferred to meet a girl in daily life, naturally.
>>> CORRECT!

Because I thought that people choose someone they like by only appearance ON a blind date.
>>> CORRECT!

It's very narrow sight to decide who she is.
>>> It's a very narrow sight to decide who she is.

So, when I got some suggestion of a blind date, I usually refused it.
>>> CORRECT!

Some people can ask me how did you accept the blind data you met your girlfriend.
>>> Some people asked me how did I accept the blind date to meet my girlfriend.

Actually, I didn't have to think about meeting someone in 2022.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don't have a plan of meeting someone in 2022.

But senior who was my laboratory leader suggested the blind date.
>>> But my senior laboratory leader suggested the blind date.

I couldn't refuse that suggestion because he is my senior scientist.
>>> CORRECT!

If I think about it now, I really appreciate it.
>>> CORRECT!

It was a chance to meet my girlfriend who is really lovely.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>>  It was a chance to meet my lovely girlfriend.

These days, I recommend blind dates to others in my team.
>>> CORRECT!
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